Please feel free to leave me some feedback!
I'm relatively new to playing Flowey, and every day I am learning new secrets of Undertale.
I
highly encourage leaving some feedback so I can improve. If you'd also like to discuss some headcanon, I'd be thrilled to.
Here are some suggestions!
[Possible areas of critiques:]
1. Voice - does it sound like Flowey? Can you hear his voice when I play? How can I make him sound more accurate?
2. Characterization - Does he act like Flowey? Has he done anything unusual that doesn't seem Flowey-like? What do you feel was the more 'IC action or thought'? Why? Examples and discussion are incredibly encouraged - even in anon.
3. Motivations - Do I have his priorities straight? What should be important to him that I'm not covering?
4. Canon - Have I gotten some game facts wrong? Is Flowey strong enough? Am I making him TOO strong? Is there an interpretation or headcanon of Flowey you think is out of place? In what way would it be more appropriate to Flowey character?
5. Technical - How's my grammar?
6. Storytelling - Do I make things interesting for you as an RPer? Do I put enough thought into posts? How are the plots Flowey is involved in? How can I make them more interesting for you? How can I make your character feel important when we play? How can I help your character play out his or her plots? How can I help your character have their time in the spotlight? Am I giving you enough to respond to with each post? Have I ever made a post that just 'turned you off'? Why?
7. Player Etiquette - Am I breaking any rules? Making inappropriate comments? Am I making you feel welcome? Am I easy or hard to plot and or work with? Am I easy to approach? Am I god-moding? Are you having a positive experience overall? Am I tagging enough outside of my fandom?
8. Feeling! - Something is not quite right, but can't quite put your finger on it? Describe how it feels wrong or right. Use your gut!
Again, thanks so much for your time! Please don't be afraid to leave me feedback. Concrit is not a personal attack, and I'll seriously consider any feedback that's left.
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